Interim feedback

I enjoyed the interim, chucked myself in first to get it out the way as I was slightly nervous, but I felt all right a minute in. I appreciated the feedback tom gave me, and completely understood where he came from when he talked about the series, and with all honesty as I was reading it, it was even looking the same to me.

my project was meant to be based on human traces within the landscape, I somehow got very lost and confused along the way & started talking about the effects of human traces which isn't what I wanted to do. I know what what happened, but literally had some mental mind block along the way.

So im defiantly going to reshoot & try make sense in writing a bit more, happy iv'e learnt from that.

Tom also mentioned about distance of the subjects in the photograph, maybe in the next try, have them all at a similar distance so it isn't the first thing that strikes you in the image, which makes sense to me.

So im happy that it helped me also build up a bit of confidence when talking in front of others & hopefully with my future work in the next project.

The more I look at them, the more I realise. Ah well. learnt my lesson.